Devin Begins

devin- · Post by **devin-** » Mon Sep 23, 2013 3:51 pm

[youtube]xZVi4Cxb-2Q[/youtube]
DL Coming soon!

music: For All Eternity - 'Solid Ground'

THANKS TO:
milo
paintball
canteen
taylorb
aimtek
chibbers (jk)
diso
ryN
rejan

Theworst · Post by **Theworst** » Mon Sep 23, 2013 4:03 pm

Your wall hack clips should really be overlays. Also, slowing down a clip between kills so the next shot will sync, ruins the flow of the movie, better off just fade/dissolve cutting the clips together.

Not bad tho, music hurt my head tho.

k4b00m · Post by **k4b00m** » Mon Sep 23, 2013 5:45 pm

I enjoyed the music, but yeah the wallhack effect could be fixed. If I ever get around to it I'll make a short video on how to edit wallhacks in vegas to look good.. but if you want to fiddle with it more yourself, try lining up the regular clip with the wallhack clip on a video track above it and use the cookie cutter effect on the wallhack clip, use rectangle shape and have the feather at around 1.7ish.

also I noticed a lot of the clips had a small rectangle at the topleft of the screen, is that the scoreboard?

tugger · Post by **tugger** » Mon Sep 23, 2013 5:46 pm

awful music. hardcore kids are ugly... but yeah frags were good

devin- · Post by **devin-** » Mon Sep 23, 2013 5:55 pm

It was on my two old demos, I have no idea what did that. I was going to do the wallhack effect to make it better with a green screen, but I already synced them and I didn't want to re-do it cause I'm lazy

knockout · Post by **knockout** » Mon Sep 23, 2013 6:00 pm

Better than I anticipated. Your kar frags were pretty good, especially for a non-invite player at this stage in the game. Some things to think about if you decide to do another one:

The music was terrible. Even though it may be a song you really like, you have to remember that it's not entirely for you. You probably want to pick something a little easier to listen to, as well as something that can synch better with your frags. I remember when I put a Megadeth song in my movie I thought it was kind of walking the line, but I picked a radio-friendly song of theirs and I don't think anyone complained about it.

You kind of went overboard on the effects. It felt like every shot had some silly lighting effect to it that is kind of unnecessary. The shots are good enough on their own to just be enjoyed.
-Also, the wallhack effect was really ugly. Probably want to find a better one.

It felt kind of slow. I'm not entirely sure why, but it seemed like the overall speed of the footage was...slow. Maybe you added a little too much slow motion or something. Maybe some fast forwarding through grenade primes and stuff like that could help.

rolyat · Post by **rolyat** » Mon Sep 23, 2013 6:00 pm

tugger wrote:awful music. hardcore kids are ugly... but yeah frags were good

For All Eternity isn't hardcore

taylor · Post by **taylor** » Mon Sep 23, 2013 6:01 pm

growing up so fast :']

milo · Post by **milo** » Mon Sep 23, 2013 6:29 pm

I'm looking forward to Devin Knight and Devin Rises

Post by **toxinatoR** » Mon Sep 23, 2013 7:22 pm

Theworst wrote:Your wall hack clips should really be overlays. Also, slowing down a clip between kills so the next shot will sync, ruins the flow of the movie, better off just fade/dissolve cutting the clips together.

Not bad tho, music hurt my head tho.

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